1º critica.. ejem ejem! esto es importante.. ehhhh ehmmmm me gusta mucho la cara, has mejorado ^o^ y esa narizzz k mona! y los ojos y to, muy lindo, y se parece al original ;P t voy a dar una notaza ;P

I'm not sure what Kina said, but i like it.

:3 nice job, a little crit for eye ^^
k se nos enfadan los yankis esta guapo, lo unico el ojo, recuerda q mas o menos se situa encima de la naris. Nos vemos bella dama

the nose looks strange...

Try to not make the color so waxy; the hair texture does not look like hair, but rather like plasticine ridges. The facial features are slightly off, which makes them seem "glued on", too. (I am not sure if it's that evident to everyone, but I see it.)

Just smoothness of color has no real value. Work with texture and light; and don't worry if you get some texture that is rough - when it is in the right place, texture would only add to the realism. Also, I think you'll benefit from practicing with planes - see Loomis's "Successful Drawing" for the discussion of how to analyze volume with planes for convincing lighting.

Very nice

no digo na del color, pero pa mi ke ta salio un pokito hidrocefalico no?

i like her eyes